Holy crap, my writing got a 6, along with some other girl in my class.  Although, I question the standards to get a 6 due to the fact my fanfictions can be better than this.  The whole thing composed of my repeating the same "I would.." and reused some ideas, just changing them up a bit.  Maybe if it was a fantasy work instead of an expository, I would be prouder of my work but frankly, staring at it makes me cringe.  I'll rewrite that junk later, I am too busy writing fanfiction and staying up to four on reddit.  Good night, you nocturnal peeps.